The Nature of Despair
An abandoned space,
Offering no warmth, there is only-
The taint of spilled beer
On the lipless walls,
The pollution of over-hasty excrement
Hanging in the air,
The promise of release in the drained syringes
lying exhausted on the floor.
A space so silent
You can almost hear
The whisper of your sanity sliding
out the space underneath the door,
Leaving behind madness,
And it's hungry gaping grin.
A cold clenches the lungs with angry fists. You can’t
.....breathe. And all that is squeezed out of you in the end
Are sharp tears thick and portentous as a newborn baby’s choked cries
As it enters our world.
Offering no warmth, there is only-
The taint of spilled beer
On the lipless walls,
The pollution of over-hasty excrement
Hanging in the air,
The promise of release in the drained syringes
lying exhausted on the floor.
A space so silent
You can almost hear
The whisper of your sanity sliding
out the space underneath the door,
Leaving behind madness,
And it's hungry gaping grin.
A cold clenches the lungs with angry fists. You can’t
.....breathe. And all that is squeezed out of you in the end
Are sharp tears thick and portentous as a newborn baby’s choked cries
As it enters our world.
10 Comments:
Oops thir paragraph!!!!!You last but one paragraph, I like that very much!! and the last three lines too!
Totaly touched...so much poetry to linger...
Thank you plus and nasra :) Kind of you both to drop by. So sorry it has taken me this long to respond :(
Wow -- very powerful!
Thanks Andrew, so are your haikus my dear!
im enjoying your poetry you are very good
aloha
from the big island of Hawaii
shanna
Aloha Shanna!
Thanks for visiting my blog! Hawaiian haikus...WOW! :)))
You have lovely poems here Medusa...I loved the lines "A space so silent
You can almost hear"...
where have you been? I miss your poetry! :(
gd stuff down here...
humbled by yr poems..
=)
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